madarchodo maa ke loudo..bhosdi waalo kya bakchodi macha rakhi hai beti chodo ..koi kaam dhaam nahi hai bhen de loudo….saale usne kavita likhi tum logo ki gaand me chunne kyu kaat rahe maa ke lundo ..rundi ke bachcho aaram se apna kaam karo nahi to sabko yanha se bahar kar doonga……..
A really good poem, but it needs to have more words before we can call it a perfect poem. It is really nice. Keep it up!
MAGNIFICENT, SUPERB, EXCELLENT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
JHAKAS OR BAKVAS
I SAY BBBBBBBBBAAAAAAAAAAKKKKKKKKKKVVVVVVVVVVVVVAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
It is a good and meaningful poem.
Whoever is writing bad about this poem means they don’t know HINDI.
Poem achchhi hai. Jisne bhi is poem ke bare mein bura likha hai unko Hindi nahi aat aur woh KUTTE hain.
To people who insulted this Poem…
Go fuck urself whoever insulter it, try writing one urself mofos. And stop insulting other ppl’s work!
To the Poem..
Its amazing, almost like flawless
make more of these!
kya aaploog mujhe help karsakte hain?
moejhe bhi hindi sikhna hain .. mein bhi liekhna chahtie hoon aur pharna chahtie hoon kya iek website hain jaha mein free mein phar saktien hoon?
i hope you guys could help me out this problem …
please email me on shaaaarr@live.nl
tanks
i read ur comments, some was good, some was very bad, i think if you can not write something good, then please dont stop others to write something good,
If you can not appreciate than, no problem………………., then please dont criticise them, who want to write some thing,
Being a good humanbeing or like a good citizen, plz dont write such type of comments, i hope u will think on this.
he kavita tum jo huminty ka vasta de rahi ho….. ye batao ki jab achha aur bura dono ek hi baat hoti hai ye dekhane ka naziriya hota hai
Dear all,
i read ur comments, some was good, some was very bad, i think if you can not write something good, then please dont stop others to write something good,
If you can not appreciate than, no problem………………., then please dont criticise them, who want to write some thing,
Being a good humanbeing or like a good citizen, plz dont write such type of comments, i hope u will think on this.
good luck
Kavita
ye tum bakavas likh rahi ho ….. aisa lag raha hai kisi ladaki ne likha isi liye tum tarif kar rhi hai jisne bhi likha ………puchana kaha se churaya hai….
hey, not bad
at least u tried
but u know there r some cheap ppl here like devansh & akkibaba.com who r making so bad comments..hey who r making those bad & rubbish comments do u have d guts to rite a poem .. i gs no bcoz u don’t know wats a poem…& bcoz cheap & dirty ppl like u r just **** ***
abey haramkhor Rohit saale agar tera naukar is se accha likhta hota naa to haramee saale woh aaj tere malik hota aur tu uska naukar…. abey saale kavita likhni aati hai? yaa bus commet hi likhna aata hai….
abe saali surbhi haramkhor, kamini saara din apne boy friend ke saath hi chipki rehti hai.. padai to tere bas ki hai nahi… badi aaye isse acha to main apne boyfriend ko likhti hoon… abe kutiya tere boyfriend hai bhi kya?? agar hoga bhi naa to teri sadi poems sun kar bhaag gaya hoga….
kaminey apne maa ki choot k ander se dhoond k laya h kya?????bADA aya likhne vala saaalaaaa kutte ki dum tati kha le kaale rang ki ab chut k raja bukwasss poem kutte gandu
are yar mera poem suno. derd me duba huwa,main kinara dundhta hoon.koi to mile, ak sahara dundhta hoon.tum yoon hi jamin pe bhatakte rah jaoge.main to falak pe sitara dundhta hoon.
hey………. jo bhi is poem ko bura bol reha hei vo khud to koi poem likh nehi saketa
n jo likhta hei use demotivate ker reha hei
himmat hei to khud likh ke dikhaiye
comment pass kerna aasan hei khud likhna aasan nehi hei
u r a good poet , and u have written a good poem but i can write better than u , i never accepted this from u and now i think i can write better than u!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!hateu!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ye bakvaas hai sab poem asi hoti hai kya jisne banayi hai us mai shayd diimg nahi hai.poem likhna koi bacho ka khhel nahi hai aur mujhe bhout dukh ho raha hai jisne ye poem likhi vo gadha tha.agr isme thoda kuch aur bhi likh daeta to tare kya jana tha.apna mazak banane ke liye ye poem likh di.kya baat hai yaar achi poem hai aur bhi likhna . .mza aayega commant karne mai haha.ok chalta hu dosto apna khayal rakhna..
agr kisi ko kala ki kadar karni nhi ati to itni bad thinking nhi rakhni chye ya comment nhi karne chye…apko achi nhi lagi to chup raho..apni aukat to mat dikhyo
ye koi poem hai kya??????? TERE BAAP NE KYA NASBANDI KARA LI THI JO TERE JAISE NALAYAK SANTAAN PAIDA HUI????
TERE TO DONO HAATH AUR MOOHN(MOUTH) TOD DENA CHAIYE TAAKI TU POEM NA LIKH PAAYE AUR NA BOL PAAYE……..
TERI MAA KI
ye koi poem hai kya??????? TERE BAAP NE KYA NASBANDI KARA LI THI JO TERE JAISE NALAYAK SANTAAN PAIDA HUI????
TERE TO DONO HAATH AUR MOOHN(MOUTH) TOD DENA CHAIYE TAAKI TU POEM NA LIKH PAAYE AUR NA BOL PAAYE……..
TERI MAA KI
it is very very extremely very veryeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee not so good actually i want to say those as gadhe who had criticised and praised it. ok gadhe bye
ohhhhhooooooooooohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh…..
i have read most of the post.some r liking the poem while other r not
bt still mst of thm r abt dislikn it.if we shold not encourage someone dn why we r dismoraling it…..atleast who so ever has wrtn ds poem tried well of his and i really respect dt…….. keep going smoothly ..,..,,,,.,….
anyway ur poem is too good,keep wrtn n be positve alws
Chutia poem hai kiski gand mari thi jo itni Baaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaakkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaassssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss poem likhi
jin logo ko padna likhna nahi aata jo log illiterate hai, unhe ye bakwas lagegi………. and jo log galiya de rahe hai unhe bas itna kehna hai mera ki apne maa beheno ko hi tum ye sab gali de rahe ho samjhe………… kuch kar sakte to kisi ko galat bhi mat kaho and one thing apni life mei kuch banne ki koshish karo na ki kisi ko gali dene ki tumhare maa baap nei tumhe apna naam roshan karne ke liye janma hai na ki gali dene ko understand…………………………. whenever i see you i slap u…….. gali dene wale bad boys……. nahi very bad boys………………..
You can definitely see your enthusiasm in the paintings you write. The arena hopes for more passionate writers like you who aren’t afraid to mention how they believe. All the time go after your heart.
I was recommended this blog by my cousin. I am not sure whether this post is written by him
as nobody else know such detailed about my difficulty.
You’re amazing! Thanks!
Livette said,
April 17, 2007 @ 5:41 am
Nice blog!
Brij said,
July 31, 2007 @ 9:19 am
Nice poem…
hghg said,
October 26, 2007 @ 1:48 pm
itni gandi kavita thoo thoo thoo
hghg said,
October 29, 2007 @ 7:34 am
bakvas se bhi bakvas
md said,
November 6, 2007 @ 7:55 am
dhat,burbak
amit said,
November 27, 2007 @ 12:05 pm
itni gandi kavita kaise kisi ke dimag me aa sakti h
ria said,
November 27, 2007 @ 12:36 pm
main tumse kaiguna jayada ganda likhti…try again…..
BEHZAD said,
December 3, 2007 @ 1:41 pm
ZABARDAST POEM
BEHZAD said,
December 3, 2007 @ 1:43 pm
AHA! KITNA BAKWAS KAVITA HAI
BEHZAD said,
December 3, 2007 @ 1:47 pm
WAH! KITNA BAKWAS KAVITA HAI
amelia said,
December 16, 2007 @ 5:30 am
this is a poem?
tanmay said,
January 2, 2008 @ 2:20 pm
make some more funny hindi poems
pooja mishra said,
January 7, 2008 @ 12:15 pm
itna bakwasss poem aaj tak kabhi nahi,na to suna aur naa hi deekha.
A. Bakshi said,
January 13, 2008 @ 2:54 pm
good poem
miley said,
January 14, 2008 @ 11:56 am
hey u need to rite more words.
and funny poems
DHEERAJ said,
January 29, 2008 @ 5:39 pm
hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii
http://hindiportal.wordpress.com/2007/04/14/funny-hindi-poems/
kanika said,
February 6, 2008 @ 4:18 pm
useless!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ISHITA said,
February 9, 2008 @ 10:41 am
Bakwaas
shivani said,
February 9, 2008 @ 4:11 pm
please make this poem little big to make it more beautiful and funny
shivani said,
February 9, 2008 @ 4:14 pm
will you all up there be quite leave it yaar
laylah said,
February 11, 2008 @ 2:06 pm
as everyone is making bad comments for u,u just dont mind ok.they all r mad and silly dumbos.short,but nice poem
akkibaba.com said,
February 15, 2008 @ 3:22 pm
madarchodo maa ke loudo..bhosdi waalo kya bakchodi macha rakhi hai beti chodo ..koi kaam dhaam nahi hai bhen de loudo….saale usne kavita likhi tum logo ki gaand me chunne kyu kaat rahe maa ke lundo ..rundi ke bachcho aaram se apna kaam karo nahi to sabko yanha se bahar kar doonga……..
surbhi .s said,
April 17, 2008 @ 11:48 am
it is very good, easy to understand.it is very real
spa said,
April 17, 2008 @ 2:22 pm
A really good poem, but it needs to have more words before we can call it a perfect poem. It is really nice. Keep it up!
MAGNIFICENT, SUPERB, EXCELLENT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
tanya said,
April 22, 2008 @ 10:18 am
bakvas
JASLEEN said,
April 24, 2008 @ 5:32 pm
ITS REALLY VERY NICE POEM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
george washington said,
May 5, 2008 @ 3:44 pm
wow mai toh kahi better likh leti
punya & Ananya said,
May 11, 2008 @ 7:56 am
very good effort
poo master said,
May 15, 2008 @ 2:31 pm
Speak English!
diksha said,
May 22, 2008 @ 6:31 am
nice poem…
liled it…[:)][:)]
diksha said,
May 22, 2008 @ 6:32 am
nice poem…
liked it…[:)][:)]
devansh said,
June 10, 2008 @ 4:20 pm
kutte ki tarah poem…sale woh harami hoga jisne woh poem likhi hai….woh zarrooor kutte ki mot mare gaa
priyal said,
June 14, 2008 @ 10:38 am
coio0fcixoofis0dokonkcmyo
gunnu said,
June 20, 2008 @ 5:05 am
your poems r so nice
but u should write long ones too.
gunnu said,
June 20, 2008 @ 5:05 am
your poems r so nice but u should write long ones too.
Vaibhav said,
June 23, 2008 @ 5:52 am
Abhay kuttia ki aulaad kahaan se dhund ke aai hai?
tush said,
June 23, 2008 @ 9:27 am
bilkul bakwaas kuch to dimag laga leta
kutte ayenda dimag lagakar likhiyo
tush said,
June 23, 2008 @ 9:30 am
cfuctriyktiugfuygtoghgfgjvghfy
unknown said,
June 24, 2008 @ 3:01 pm
JHAKAS OR BAKVAS
I SAY BBBBBBBBBAAAAAAAAAAKKKKKKKKKKVVVVVVVVVVVVVAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Saher Nasim said,
June 26, 2008 @ 2:56 pm
It is a good and meaningful poem.
Whoever is writing bad about this poem means they don’t know HINDI.
Poem achchhi hai. Jisne bhi is poem ke bare mein bura likha hai unko Hindi nahi aat aur woh KUTTE hain.
lily said,
June 30, 2008 @ 6:20 am
this poem is baku baku . plz try again for better work
Kartik Kumar said,
July 10, 2008 @ 1:26 am
Nice wonderful poem, I will recite this at my school…thanks
Shradha Agarwal said,
July 10, 2008 @ 1:30 am
Thanks for nice poem, do you have more such Hindi poems?
raj said,
July 14, 2008 @ 7:26 am
bhout sad poem hai . ja koi achi poem dhund ka la!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
tisha said,
July 19, 2008 @ 3:26 pm
chhiii!!! itni ghatiya poem…yuk,…..disgusting..
SHISHIR KANJILAL said,
July 20, 2008 @ 11:12 am
good peom
vani said,
July 20, 2008 @ 1:07 pm
nice kiddish poem but make it longer
aseem said,
July 24, 2008 @ 5:51 am
bakwaas
puja said,
July 25, 2008 @ 12:14 pm
its okay….but y only 1poem…..we want more..
ashley said,
August 2, 2008 @ 1:17 pm
ewwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!
anya said,
August 3, 2008 @ 4:46 am
good effort
sonam said,
August 3, 2008 @ 6:31 am
it was so bad…………..worst poem writen!!!eeeeeeeeeeeeewwwwwwww! hate it!!!!
reader said,
August 3, 2008 @ 8:27 am
madarchudaai yeh koi koi poem hai bhosdi ki behenchod
vipin said,
August 3, 2008 @ 8:29 am
mere muh pe phoonsi hai mere papa co hain me pagal hoon
dhanchus said,
August 3, 2008 @ 8:29 am
me abushad se padta hoon
hulk! said,
August 3, 2008 @ 12:08 pm
yuckk
!!
are you gay>>>.??
WIERDO!!
bharti said,
August 8, 2008 @ 3:38 pm
kabadi ko dedo
bharti said,
August 8, 2008 @ 3:38 pm
yuck wierd
Achint said,
August 9, 2008 @ 11:18 am
please send me more hindi poems and more funny also thankyou.
rakesh said,
August 31, 2008 @ 3:57 pm
kuchh maza sa nahi aaya.
ritu said,
August 31, 2008 @ 6:08 pm
2 short!!!
shweta said,
September 4, 2008 @ 9:43 am
bhangar se bhi jadhya bhangar kavita
rhea said,
September 7, 2008 @ 8:43 am
fantastic wordings but poem quiet short
rhea said,
September 7, 2008 @ 8:45 am
I liked itn a lot
rhea said,
September 7, 2008 @ 8:48 am
I liked it a lot . send me few funny poems .
rhea said,
September 7, 2008 @ 8:57 am
fabulos ausum cute laughing and enjoyable poem
vrinda said,
September 14, 2008 @ 9:31 am
funny
jayant said,
September 20, 2008 @ 11:10 am
madarchod aisi bhi koi poem hoti hai
jayant said,
September 20, 2008 @ 11:11 am
ghanta chudi hui poem
atul gaur said,
September 23, 2008 @ 10:29 am
achchha hai
aise he to sikhoge
atul gaur said,
September 23, 2008 @ 10:30 am
lage raho
i wish kabhi maithili sharan gupta bhi suru mai esa he likhte honge
Kush Agarwal said,
October 6, 2008 @ 12:50 pm
tooooo short but nice
aniruddh said,
October 13, 2008 @ 2:28 pm
veryfunnyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy
jay said,
October 16, 2008 @ 10:20 am
chutiya ka baccha…….faltu poem hai be randi
Rohit Jain said,
October 17, 2008 @ 9:10 am
Not bad
shrey said,
October 22, 2008 @ 5:27 pm
teri poem ki vajhe se main competition har gaya
bakvas poem hai
Rahul said,
October 22, 2008 @ 5:31 pm
chutiya banata hai public ko bewakoof samjha hai sale
madhav said,
October 22, 2008 @ 5:32 pm
teri gand pe danda re
ank said,
November 12, 2008 @ 6:03 am
madar chod bhosdi valo teri maa ke bhosde me tujhe vapas gused doonga tab bakchodi likhna band karega
sankalp said,
December 3, 2008 @ 11:29 am
please have funny poemes
varis said,
December 29, 2008 @ 11:18 pm
to people who said its bad…
Try writin one urself u assholes! Fuckin losers dont do anything urself and insulting other ppl!
varis said,
December 29, 2008 @ 11:20 pm
To people who insulted this Poem…
Go fuck urself whoever insulter it, try writing one urself mofos. And stop insulting other ppl’s work!
To the Poem..
Its amazing, almost like flawless
make more of these!
sana said,
January 4, 2009 @ 4:46 pm
thodi achi hai bhahut nahi
shreya said,
February 2, 2009 @ 2:33 pm
a wonderful and funny poem which is quiet short.
rachel said,
February 16, 2009 @ 2:58 pm
plsssssss do write a bit longer
other ways good gob!!!!
rohit said,
February 25, 2009 @ 9:04 am
saalo
rohit said,
February 25, 2009 @ 9:04 am
sabki maa chudego 5 rs ghante par
ann said,
February 25, 2009 @ 3:13 pm
very sweet and very cute
paagal kutta said,
April 2, 2009 @ 6:58 am
abey dimaag ki garmi badh gayi hain. vapas garam kavita mat likhna.
miss me said,
April 9, 2009 @ 5:07 pm
kya aaploog mujhe help karsakte hain?
moejhe bhi hindi sikhna hain .. mein bhi liekhna chahtie hoon aur pharna chahtie hoon kya iek website hain jaha mein free mein phar saktien hoon?
i hope you guys could help me out this problem …
please email me on shaaaarr@live.nl
tanks
abid said,
May 3, 2009 @ 3:32 pm
aik dam bakwas ye hindi poems to achi hoti hee nahi
PUNITA said,
May 10, 2009 @ 4:43 pm
THIS IS NOT TO BE CRITICISED BUT TO BE APPRECIATED
NICE KEEP IT UP.
Himadri said,
May 13, 2009 @ 1:00 pm
gudd poemm…very funny…i wnted a poem for my project…
neeraj said,
May 16, 2009 @ 12:50 pm
nicce
suzzane said,
May 22, 2009 @ 7:38 pm
foooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
shivam said,
June 12, 2009 @ 3:24 am
nice poem good words used
arushi said,
June 12, 2009 @ 7:09 am
a nice poem to be learnt.those who have insulted it, are insulting their language
annie said,
June 17, 2009 @ 11:20 am
right a bit more funny poems
hannah montana said,
June 17, 2009 @ 11:28 am
most iritating poem
utkarsh said,
July 2, 2009 @ 12:45 pm
Not bad
sakshi said,
July 3, 2009 @ 10:14 am
bahut darawane hai.
shishir said,
July 13, 2009 @ 5:17 pm
kyun likhi hai 1 to reason batado plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz.
hannah said,
July 14, 2009 @ 10:00 am
i really loved it supereb
barath said,
July 14, 2009 @ 2:22 pm
I REALY LOVED IT SUPERB
barath said,
July 14, 2009 @ 2:22 pm
IT IS THE BEST
barath said,
July 14, 2009 @ 2:29 pm
GOOD BUT NOT FUNNY
miley cyrus said,
July 27, 2009 @ 1:26 pm
nice but its not funny
deeksha said,
July 29, 2009 @ 3:19 pm
isse zyada faltu poem nahi dekhi . There is nothing in this poem to laugh. Please make funny poems coz we need it.
deeksha said,
July 29, 2009 @ 3:20 pm
isse zyada faltu poem nahi dekhi . There is nothing in this poem to laugh.
hannah said,
July 29, 2009 @ 3:21 pm
its not at all good & there is nothing to laugh in this poem
samana said,
July 31, 2009 @ 5:43 pm
not bad…try ur best to give some good poems….i appriciate that u tried to make people laugh but this time u failed…best of luck for next poem…
kavita sharma said,
August 11, 2009 @ 8:36 am
nice poem.
anant said,
August 17, 2009 @ 4:03 am
Not bad . It’s good.
kutta said,
August 17, 2009 @ 1:52 pm
duniya ki harami kavitao se ek
surbhi said,
August 22, 2009 @ 9:18 am
abbey kutte
‘POEM’ word ki besti hai tu isse accha to main apne boyfriend ko likh kaar deti
shubh said,
August 25, 2009 @ 9:39 am
if its a compitetion i can write bad than u
Ankit said,
August 26, 2009 @ 3:23 pm
Kitni Bakwas Hai !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
gaurav pawar said,
August 30, 2009 @ 6:52 am
kisii chutia ne likhe hogi
yazhini said,
August 30, 2009 @ 3:30 pm
good and funny
Hai said,
August 31, 2009 @ 4:16 pm
Mery liye tere ye poem badi cam ayi
Thank youuuuuuuuuuu! very much
Bye
hans-hans ke lotpot said,
September 6, 2009 @ 1:01 pm
Funny poem search karni thi to ye poem saamne aai. Poem se jyada comments padh ke hanste-2 lotpot ho gayi. Waise yeh poem ke naam pe dhabba hai.
siddharth said,
September 7, 2009 @ 12:51 pm
bad
Kavita said,
September 11, 2009 @ 5:54 am
Dear all,
i read ur comments, some was good, some was very bad, i think if you can not write something good, then please dont stop others to write something good,
If you can not appreciate than, no problem………………., then please dont criticise them, who want to write some thing,
Being a good humanbeing or like a good citizen, plz dont write such type of comments, i hope u will think on this.
good luck
Kavita
rishav ranjan said,
September 12, 2009 @ 12:26 pm
unforgetable
rishav ranjan said,
September 12, 2009 @ 12:27 pm
unforgetable yadien
monika said,
September 13, 2009 @ 1:08 pm
bilkul ssssssssssaaaaaaaaaaadiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii hui he! chiiiiii.
nimish said,
September 13, 2009 @ 4:08 pm
good but some more improvment
Pragya d said,
September 14, 2009 @ 9:53 am
nice.. but aur acha likh sakte ho…
shalini said,
September 15, 2009 @ 11:16 am
?????………. bakvas
sandhya said,
September 26, 2009 @ 1:20 pm
good for kids for 5-10 age group.
preet said,
September 30, 2009 @ 5:43 pm
itni bakwaas toh koi ho bhi nahi sakti
vassundhara said,
October 12, 2009 @ 3:25 pm
nice…
try hard….
love to the poem said,
October 19, 2009 @ 3:08 pm
this poem sucks
moni said,
October 24, 2009 @ 4:50 pm
nai nai !!!!!!! bhot achee poem hai!!!!!!!!8 0 me to fan hogia!!!!!!haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaan!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:d
wese mujhe hindi parhnay nai aatee!!!!!!;)
jasjirat said,
November 2, 2009 @ 6:34 am
master madan mera brother
teeshaaaaaaaaa said,
November 2, 2009 @ 2:57 pm
agar kisi ko achi lagi ya nahin lagi ye poem but mujhe to mast lagi
teeshaaaaaaaaa said,
November 2, 2009 @ 2:58 pm
niceeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
rohit said,
November 16, 2009 @ 4:06 pm
ini bakwas poem isse accha to mera nakur likh leta hai
JAIDEEP SINGH said,
November 17, 2009 @ 10:39 am
very nice poem if created by u the 1 saying this bad is worser than me also ’cause i am also not a good writer of hindi but great in ENGLISH
Prakash said,
November 22, 2009 @ 11:16 am
aap ne sheershak diya hai funny hindi poems. ye baal geet hain, jinhe aap angrezi me narsri raiems kahate hai.
akshay said,
November 26, 2009 @ 5:33 pm
are likhne se pahle kuch to socha hota nalayek ,
ye koi kavita hai ya ramayn ka paath
huuuuuuuuuud
akshay said,
November 26, 2009 @ 5:34 pm
l,
bhudev said,
December 2, 2009 @ 4:18 am
bakvas
FOR KAVITA : said,
December 10, 2009 @ 8:08 pm
he kavita tum jo huminty ka vasta de rahi ho….. ye batao ki jab achha aur bura dono ek hi baat hoti hai ye dekhane ka naziriya hota hai
Dear all,
i read ur comments, some was good, some was very bad, i think if you can not write something good, then please dont stop others to write something good,
If you can not appreciate than, no problem………………., then please dont criticise them, who want to write some thing,
Being a good humanbeing or like a good citizen, plz dont write such type of comments, i hope u will think on this.
good luck
Kavita
ye tum bakavas likh rahi ho ….. aisa lag raha hai kisi ladaki ne likha isi liye tum tarif kar rhi hai jisne bhi likha ………puchana kaha se churaya hai….
emma said,
December 15, 2009 @ 10:50 am
hey, not bad
at least u tried
but u know there r some cheap ppl here like devansh & akkibaba.com who r making so bad comments..hey who r making those bad & rubbish comments do u have d guts to rite a poem .. i gs no bcoz u don’t know wats a poem…& bcoz cheap & dirty ppl like u r just **** ***
Nikhil said,
December 22, 2009 @ 3:27 pm
Nothing Funny here…. but ok 4 kids to read…
adagxzv said,
January 14, 2010 @ 4:59 pm
potty jasa lagta hai
diwakar pandey said,
January 16, 2010 @ 8:53 am
abe saale dagxzv, kehe to aise raha hai jaise sale tu khana nahi hamesha tatti hi khata hai…
Bada aya potty jaisa lag raha hai….
diwakar pandey said,
January 16, 2010 @ 8:56 am
abey haramkhor Rohit saale agar tera naukar is se accha likhta hota naa to haramee saale woh aaj tere malik hota aur tu uska naukar…. abey saale kavita likhni aati hai? yaa bus commet hi likhna aata hai….
diwakar pandey said,
January 16, 2010 @ 8:59 am
abey kameene love to the poem said, saale tu to suck ho gaya ab to tu bacha he nahi hoga, abey ullu ke pathe ab tere se shadi kaun karega???
diwakar pandey said,
January 16, 2010 @ 9:02 am
abe saali surbhi haramkhor, kamini saara din apne boy friend ke saath hi chipki rehti hai.. padai to tere bas ki hai nahi… badi aaye isse acha to main apne boyfriend ko likhti hoon… abe kutiya tere boyfriend hai bhi kya?? agar hoga bhi naa to teri sadi poems sun kar bhaag gaya hoga….
diwakar pandey said,
January 16, 2010 @ 9:05 am
gaurav pawar usse bada to tu hai…
av said,
January 17, 2010 @ 7:13 am
cooooooooooooooooooooooool!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
av said,
January 17, 2010 @ 7:14 am
aur kuch likhna
av said,
January 17, 2010 @ 7:15 am
isse hi bakwas
yash said,
January 22, 2010 @ 12:09 pm
very nice
stella said,
February 2, 2010 @ 5:54 pm
terrific
prashasti said, said,
February 4, 2010 @ 1:14 pm
how can you write such a poem
nimisha said,
February 4, 2010 @ 1:16 pm
what can i say about such a poem
kanak said,
February 12, 2010 @ 5:26 pm
theek hai ………..bt try to write more
kanak said,
February 12, 2010 @ 5:31 pm
poem is okkkkkkk…bt i m shoked
kaise comment mare hue hai logo ne
shasha said,
February 13, 2010 @ 4:43 pm
kutta saali poem mere hai
joy said,
February 13, 2010 @ 4:45 pm
bakwas saala jo bhe aise poems likhta hai na usku jute uthake maro
sexy said,
February 13, 2010 @ 4:47 pm
kise ke pas koye kam nahi hai kya! wese mere sath fuck karna hai to????????????
titiksha said,
February 13, 2010 @ 4:49 pm
nice poem jo be bad comments likh rahe hai unke bat mat dekho
good job
Stacy said,
February 19, 2010 @ 11:12 am
ha ha i culd not stop myself so cute , funny and short poens I LOVE IT
vikrant said,
March 5, 2010 @ 8:00 am
ekdum bakwasssssssssssssssssss
anvesha said,
March 12, 2010 @ 2:31 pm
wow!!…..very good…..keep it up!!………….what a bakwaas poem………..
nitin singh said,
March 24, 2010 @ 1:02 am
hai…………..friends.
kartik said,
April 2, 2010 @ 7:30 am
tatti… poem sale.
kartik said,
April 2, 2010 @ 7:31 am
bakwas..
aasheer bhatia said,
April 4, 2010 @ 4:30 am
you should make more poems @_@
A.J. said,
April 15, 2010 @ 8:36 am
great poem………..all those who are making bad comments are simply dumb and fools…………dont mind their words……….and best of luck for your new poetry
Lisa said,
April 17, 2010 @ 12:51 pm
okk types poem
vidushi said,
April 23, 2010 @ 9:18 am
very bad poetry
hasya kavi said,
April 29, 2010 @ 4:40 pm
english me kavita likha karo kyo hindi ka nuksan karte ho
shahrukh khan said,
May 5, 2010 @ 3:03 pm
assume poem bhut sunder
jainil ajmera said,
May 17, 2010 @ 5:09 am
wow exellent but who wrote this please who is seeking dont take these words do you know now it will help me in my holiday hw sooar li aulat
Aman said,
May 23, 2010 @ 2:45 am
Bakwas ghatia impotant poem iske maan ki chut
anonymus said,
June 1, 2010 @ 9:31 am
nice poem man
i likee it
anonymus said,
June 1, 2010 @ 9:33 am
anonymus said,
June 1, 2010 @ 9:39 am
i liked it man nice
:nice:
jaya kalra said,
June 10, 2010 @ 6:24 am
hi not bad
i like it
swtii poems
4children
ojndxgf said,
June 12, 2010 @ 8:45 am
kaminey apne maa ki choot k ander se dhoond k laya h kya?????bADA aya likhne vala saaalaaaa kutte ki dum tati kha le kaale rang ki ab chut k raja bukwasss poem kutte gandu
paridhi said,
June 14, 2010 @ 6:02 am
i could do with the poet’s name .but anyway it is really a cool poem!!!!!!!!
shiva jain said,
June 25, 2010 @ 2:52 pm
thoooooooooo thooooooooooooooooo salle isse acchi poem to main lik leta maadarchood
Pratyush Panda said,
July 1, 2010 @ 2:44 pm
gr8 poem
sweetu said,
July 1, 2010 @ 3:18 pm
mene aaj se pehle itni bekaar poem nahi padhi likhne wala saala doob kar mar jae to acha hoga
md gujre said,
July 9, 2010 @ 12:35 am
its a good poett…
niki said,
July 9, 2010 @ 12:21 pm
oh its a real shit
believe it or not but u cant b a good poet ever.
niki said,
July 9, 2010 @ 12:33 pm
dear kavita
i appreciate what u said no doubt u r a gd human but criticism makes a person perfect.
i thing what v hav writn is not bad
bye
tanvi said,
July 11, 2010 @ 8:06 am
what a lovely poem its truly mast and funny i love it
ITS
WHAT
I
CALL
EXCELLENT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:)
niki said,
July 13, 2010 @ 12:04 pm
hi
for my x bf today’s his b’day
tu samaghta kya hai ? zac efron ya ronaldo????
u r the worst person i ve seen in my life
instead of feeling happy ke tughe itna bad face hote hue ek smart gf mili
i dont ever wanna see ur face again
unfortunately hum ek he school mein hain
happy b’day
Sneha said,
July 14, 2010 @ 3:19 pm
good
Revati said,
July 15, 2010 @ 9:32 am
It was a wery good poem
bhavesh said,
July 31, 2010 @ 1:09 pm
hi bakhas poem
sdf said,
August 5, 2010 @ 8:24 am
fuckin poem
Prrrrrr said,
August 6, 2010 @ 10:08 am
bbbaaaakkkkwwwaaaassss…………………………………..
aur kuch ni mila likhne ko…….
ajay said,
August 14, 2010 @ 6:23 pm
u tried but it could br better
ajay said,
August 14, 2010 @ 6:27 pm
no matter what people say but it matter how many times they say , so don;t do mistakes again and again…………….
nikita said,
August 15, 2010 @ 9:32 am
good poem
can any body tell me that where can i get
funny poems for 4 std
if you know so pease reply
anshika said,
August 15, 2010 @ 9:36 am
good poem
can anybody tell me that
where can i get funny poems for 4 std
if you know so please reply my id
is anshika1511@gmail.com
md anzar rabbani said,
August 20, 2010 @ 10:48 pm
are yar mera poem suno. derd me duba huwa,main kinara dundhta hoon.koi to mile, ak sahara dundhta hoon.tum yoon hi jamin pe bhatakte rah jaoge.main to falak pe sitara dundhta hoon.
arsh said,
August 26, 2010 @ 5:54 pm
bbbbbbbbbbbbaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaakkkkkkkkwwwwwwwwaaaaaaaaassssssssss
Vicky said,
August 30, 2010 @ 12:07 pm
ye jhunjlate kon hai???
Aarushi said,
August 30, 2010 @ 3:39 pm
eeyak! ye koi funnypoem hai itni …… ab kya bolo bakwass se bhi gandi!!!!!!!
cool girl said,
August 31, 2010 @ 8:11 am
hey………. jo bhi is poem ko bura bol reha hei vo khud to koi poem likh nehi saketa
n jo likhta hei use demotivate ker reha hei
himmat hei to khud likh ke dikhaiye
comment pass kerna aasan hei khud likhna aasan nehi hei
cool girl said,
August 31, 2010 @ 8:13 am
if u accept my challange dn reply me on
yadavdimple24@gmail.com
m wating 4 ur reply
pranalie said,
August 31, 2010 @ 2:46 pm
u r a good poet , and u have written a good poem but i can write better than u , i never accepted this from u and now i think i can write better than u!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!hateu!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
nitin gupta said,
September 8, 2010 @ 3:35 pm
/;/
rajat garg said,
September 10, 2010 @ 11:30 am
wonderful
shivam saini said,
September 14, 2010 @ 1:49 pm
great thank you
wasimz jawaid said,
September 15, 2010 @ 9:14 am
funny poems in hindi and english….
tarana said,
September 26, 2010 @ 7:57 am
bahut acchi kavita hai main bahut hasee
sheetal said,
September 30, 2010 @ 11:01 am
gosh !!! huh!! dam
tanishq said,
October 12, 2010 @ 1:38 pm
ye bakvaas hai sab poem asi hoti hai kya jisne banayi hai us mai shayd diimg nahi hai.poem likhna koi bacho ka khhel nahi hai aur mujhe bhout dukh ho raha hai jisne ye poem likhi vo gadha tha.agr isme thoda kuch aur bhi likh daeta to tare kya jana tha.apna mazak banane ke liye ye poem likh di.kya baat hai yaar achi poem hai aur bhi likhna . .mza aayega commant karne mai haha.ok chalta hu dosto apna khayal rakhna..
tanishq said,
October 12, 2010 @ 1:44 pm
agr poem likhna hai to dost.asi poem likho jo log bhi kahe wah wah kya poem hai.agli poem jab likho to yaad rakhna.agr dost kuch galti hue ho to sory.
shubha said,
October 18, 2010 @ 3:32 am
it for nursery kid’s . there’s nothing to laugh in it, how can some people like it
sukhi said,
October 18, 2010 @ 2:45 pm
churi chod ke sale deedh ke laaand sale muth ki lassi pike bada hua tha chut ke pathe achi kavitain likha kar randi ke beej
ghhf said,
October 20, 2010 @ 1:25 am
faltu faltu faltu …………………jisne bh likhi hai aage se poem mt likhna kabhi…………………..
arushi said,
October 27, 2010 @ 12:33 pm
ha ha ha isn,t it very funny . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . who said this
rashmi said,
October 27, 2010 @ 5:44 pm
not so funny…………………………bakwasssssss
Rayshing said,
October 27, 2010 @ 6:17 pm
hey girl i liked ur poem it is a good one and i’ll write this poem in my project.
nivedha said,
October 29, 2010 @ 3:52 pm
its is very small but iti is good . however it is not fit for my resitation .
aman said,
November 9, 2010 @ 12:46 pm
fit 4 class 4 reading
small but quite gud
though not too funny
lovejeet said,
November 25, 2010 @ 10:47 am
agr kisi ko kala ki kadar karni nhi ati to itni bad thinking nhi rakhni chye ya comment nhi karne chye…apko achi nhi lagi to chup raho..apni aukat to mat dikhyo
Samrudhi said,
December 9, 2010 @ 12:37 pm
cool I loved it i would take it for my recitation competition bot its too small
Byeeeeeeeeeee
Samrudhi said,
December 9, 2010 @ 12:39 pm
Oh my god I`m gonna die Love you
mayank said,
December 22, 2010 @ 4:06 pm
oh god so good u are
roshan said,
January 3, 2011 @ 1:33 pm
worlds bakhwass!!!!!!!!
tytytytytyty said,
January 15, 2011 @ 5:09 pm
V.nice poem
Kitni achchi kavita hai!
Shaskifu said,
January 15, 2011 @ 5:38 pm
Kitni bakvaas kavita hai yaar!
Universe bakvaas
Ayushi Nahar said,
January 18, 2011 @ 3:09 pm
IT 9s short and is ment for kindergarten students
shubham said,
January 21, 2011 @ 1:43 pm
hai i am shubham you are my friend
nanaa said,
February 8, 2011 @ 2:21 pm
bakwaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaasssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Shubhangi said,
February 13, 2011 @ 12:35 pm
your poems are not good from my side.
ayush said,
February 23, 2011 @ 5:08 pm
jab barish hoti hai to tum
smrita said,
March 5, 2011 @ 1:52 pm
chi chi mind blowing jo sach mein mind blow kar de
sahil said,
April 4, 2011 @ 1:02 pm
it is so-so lekin aur mehnat k jarurat h. ok. so keep on writing
rashika said,
April 8, 2011 @ 8:56 am
very very very very cuteeeeeeee poem really aussam
gfghj said,
April 18, 2011 @ 2:23 pm
stupid
sargun said,
April 19, 2011 @ 3:15 pm
excellent poem!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
asit said,
April 20, 2011 @ 1:08 pm
yeh kavita funny kaha se thi?? par achhi koshish ki..
sanjana said,
May 3, 2011 @ 7:13 am
agar mujhe poet mil jaye na to mein use ghala ghoth ke maar dalungi……..
itna bakwas bhi koi gana hota hai kiya..
naam ke liye shayad funny hai
sanjana said,
May 3, 2011 @ 7:14 am
please stop commenting on this as very good and all
sanjana said,
May 3, 2011 @ 7:14 am
because it is nt at all good
Aryan said,
May 6, 2011 @ 12:57 pm
thik- thak
suhana said,
May 15, 2011 @ 2:42 pm
its good kahi pe kaam aayega thnaks for posting it
Kavita kosh.org said,
May 19, 2011 @ 6:25 am
it is the best poem in the world
It is an average poem
It is the worst poem in the world
A GIRL said,
June 3, 2011 @ 4:27 pm
Yea Bat Kuch Hajam Nehi Huei
sidhika said,
June 5, 2011 @ 3:18 pm
very good .the poem is very nice
Sagar Chhetri said,
June 11, 2011 @ 4:01 am
nice but for kids
TANYA TANDON said,
June 13, 2011 @ 8:52 am
coooooooool but on hot ……..
khushi said,
June 15, 2011 @ 8:57 am
kutta its good
mini said,
June 15, 2011 @ 9:10 am
hindi ka english version kab nika loga?
abir said,
June 20, 2011 @ 5:47 am
wow ! what a poem . you put a great effort
No Name said,
June 20, 2011 @ 11:16 am
Abe jada likh
bakwas said,
June 20, 2011 @ 1:11 pm
bakwas
Jen said,
June 21, 2011 @ 4:56 pm
badd poem, man!
Abhi said,
June 22, 2011 @ 4:28 am
Bakwass band kar
raj said,
June 25, 2011 @ 5:11 pm
itna bada bor kisne maara
hitesh said,
June 27, 2011 @ 5:54 am
bakwas bakweas cj=hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii
Abheet Dutt said,
June 27, 2011 @ 10:12 am
bahaut chhoti hai but thik thak hai !!!
shawn froust said,
June 29, 2011 @ 1:30 pm
ye koi poem hai kya??????? TERE BAAP NE KYA NASBANDI KARA LI THI JO TERE JAISE NALAYAK SANTAAN PAIDA HUI????
TERE TO DONO HAATH AUR MOOHN(MOUTH) TOD DENA CHAIYE TAAKI TU POEM NA LIKH PAAYE AUR NA BOL PAAYE……..
TERI MAA KI
KUCH NAHI CHAL AAPNA KAAM KAR………
asasdadss said,
July 1, 2011 @ 7:05 am
ye koi poem hai kya??????? TERE BAAP NE KYA NASBANDI KARA LI THI JO TERE JAISE NALAYAK SANTAAN PAIDA HUI????
TERE TO DONO HAATH AUR MOOHN(MOUTH) TOD DENA CHAIYE TAAKI TU POEM NA LIKH PAAYE AUR NA BOL PAAYE……..
TERI MAA KI
KUCH NAHI CHAL AAPNA KAAM KAR………
ashraf said,
July 2, 2011 @ 7:46 am
Very nice line of children……and this is true……!!
Anosh said,
July 2, 2011 @ 12:23 pm
nice
vernika said,
July 15, 2011 @ 1:48 pm
kitniii bakwasss poem hai………..idiot !!!
parth said,
July 16, 2011 @ 11:07 am
bekar
angel angry said,
July 16, 2011 @ 1:58 pm
it is very very extremely very veryeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee not so good actually i want to say those as gadhe who had criticised and praised it. ok gadhe bye
Priyanka said,
July 23, 2011 @ 5:29 am
accha hai par , bakvas hai
Priyanka said,
July 23, 2011 @ 5:31 am
cheeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeieieieiieieieieei!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!??!?!?!?!?!?!read this and gng 2 delete?!?!?!?!?!?
anatas said,
July 24, 2011 @ 2:53 am
stupidddd!!
sukriti said,
July 24, 2011 @ 7:33 am
bakwaas se bhi bakwass!
sukriti said,
July 24, 2011 @ 7:35 am
worst poem
muskaan golani said,
July 24, 2011 @ 4:48 pm
bakwas hai !!!!!!!!!!!!!! is se idiot poem is duniya mein koi nahi hai patanahi kis faltu person ne lekhe hai aur itne choti bhi hai.
Aisha Mehra said,
July 26, 2011 @ 12:38 pm
iTZ..nt 2 gUD…
dsr said,
August 7, 2011 @ 6:32 am
This is dissguisting and a bladee bastard poem
dsr said,
August 7, 2011 @ 6:34 am
u bleeedy suhana
urvashi said,
August 8, 2011 @ 6:20 am
nice & funny poem
saumya said,
August 10, 2011 @ 2:47 pm
ohhhhhooooooooooohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh…..
i have read most of the post.some r liking the poem while other r not
bt still mst of thm r abt dislikn it.if we shold not encourage someone dn why we r dismoraling it…..atleast who so ever has wrtn ds poem tried well of his and i really respect dt…….. keep going smoothly ..,..,,,,.,….
anyway ur poem is too good,keep wrtn n be positve alws
sam said,
August 18, 2011 @ 2:11 pm
its gud but cud b much more better……..
jasmine said,
August 18, 2011 @ 2:53 pm
A very short but cute poem.
ashita said,
August 19, 2011 @ 1:31 pm
lo sun lo ise poem kehte hai. baaaaaaaakvaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaas
sourav sharma said,
August 19, 2011 @ 3:56 pm
what a poem
vrundan said,
August 20, 2011 @ 4:40 pm
get lost
vrundan said,
August 20, 2011 @ 4:41 pm
wat a rubbish poem
ffffffff said,
August 22, 2011 @ 11:54 am
good
!!! i have to say this poem in school
Gaurav Saini said,
August 25, 2011 @ 1:16 pm
bekar,sadial,phateli,raddi,NOOOONSENSSSSSE,Jami te kabaad,aur kuch yad nahi aa raha, But really Dimag khapaoooooooooo
sumukh ghatkar said,
September 4, 2011 @ 10:21 am
iss kavita me koi bhi hasne wali baat nahi hai
neeelanjan said,
September 10, 2011 @ 6:23 am
Very good poem and yose who was saying tis poem is bakvas they all are useless and bakvas
Maisa said,
September 13, 2011 @ 2:46 pm
very nice poem !!!
sargun said,
October 7, 2011 @ 5:32 pm
great ,
it helped me to get A* in hindi poem recitation
sargun said,
October 7, 2011 @ 5:37 pm
i love itttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt
KAVYA said,
October 28, 2011 @ 7:16 am
NICE POEM BT COMMENTS R MIND BLOWING
ashish said,
October 29, 2011 @ 3:16 am
i like it very much
i m a lier
abhe kuch theek to likha hota
hamara time barbad kar raha hai
chiku said,
October 29, 2011 @ 6:26 am
bakwas
ankita said,
October 29, 2011 @ 6:27 am
itni gandi poem yakkkk…!
fuck
Madhav said,
November 14, 2011 @ 2:05 pm
all above are idiot , the poem is nice ,but should be littel big.once again ALLLL above are IDIOT.
ARYAN said,
November 14, 2011 @ 2:09 pm
BEST POEM EVER!IT SHOULD GET AN OSCAR.
monubhai said,
November 17, 2011 @ 3:03 pm
mast hai yar duniya buri kah de to logo ko mithe bat do u r good
Axel he'll devil said,
November 18, 2011 @ 8:56 am
Sir Kavita na likh aapko naga ghumna chaiye chutia Kuta behanchod jaa sex kar ash kar Kavita teri bas ki nahi
sara said,
November 19, 2011 @ 7:41 pm
nyc not bad
mehul said,
November 20, 2011 @ 2:21 pm
not so good
Abhinav said,
November 21, 2011 @ 9:04 am
Chutia poem hai kiski gand mari thi jo itni Baaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaakkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaassssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss poem likhi
Abhinav said,
November 21, 2011 @ 9:09 am
Chutia poem hai kiski gand mari thi jo itni Baakkwwaass!! poem likhi
shaan said,
November 24, 2011 @ 12:28 pm
mast hai gggggggggggggggggggggggggggooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddd
akhila said,
November 24, 2011 @ 2:06 pm
itni bakwaas oh my god it sucks
rahul said,
November 24, 2011 @ 3:26 pm
jin logo ko padna likhna nahi aata jo log illiterate hai, unhe ye bakwas lagegi………. and jo log galiya de rahe hai unhe bas itna kehna hai mera ki apne maa beheno ko hi tum ye sab gali de rahe ho samjhe………… kuch kar sakte to kisi ko galat bhi mat kaho and one thing apni life mei kuch banne ki koshish karo na ki kisi ko gali dene ki tumhare maa baap nei tumhe apna naam roshan karne ke liye janma hai na ki gali dene ko understand…………………………. whenever i see you i slap u…….. gali dene wale bad boys……. nahi very bad boys………………..
chauhan11 said,
December 1, 2011 @ 4:03 pm
good pakau poem
aanchal said,
December 4, 2011 @ 7:55 am
yaaarrr ……….!!! wat a fucking poem..!! gud job
)
jsdfhjkshdfgh said,
December 4, 2011 @ 1:07 pm
yaar pta kaisi poems hai..!! paglode..!!
umang said,
December 5, 2011 @ 5:13 am
very old collectons
vineet said,
December 7, 2011 @ 12:02 pm
ya,its really good and its a simple hindi used…………..
shaurya parikh said,
December 13, 2011 @ 10:13 am
bad
shaurya parikh said,
December 13, 2011 @ 10:14 am
i mean its good
vishwajeet said,
December 13, 2011 @ 10:49 am
nice poem
praney alagh said,
December 14, 2011 @ 3:43 pm
poem aake bhi nai hi
Manisha arora said,
January 8, 2012 @ 11:00 am
Nice poem
dena said,
January 10, 2012 @ 2:32 pm
ha ha ha!!!!!!!!!!
nice poem!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
wtqmwpwpt said,
January 12, 2012 @ 3:09 pm
nice!!!!
handsome boy said,
January 14, 2012 @ 4:09 am
not very nice…………….. :p
yashwant said,
January 14, 2012 @ 2:25 pm
jo bhi ye likha hai wo ab nahi likhna kuch bhi
saanchi said,
January 15, 2012 @ 6:55 am
nice poem!!!!!!!! cool
Deepak aggarwal said,
January 17, 2012 @ 5:28 pm
Ekdam faltuuuuuuuu
shruti said,
January 18, 2012 @ 1:03 pm
koi laughing poem ha……………………(faltu)
lucifer said,
February 8, 2012 @ 11:57 am
tna bakwasss poem aaj tak kabhi nahi,na to suna aur naa hi
aakaash said,
February 9, 2012 @ 2:29 pm
itni saddi fuck u bitch
jess said,
February 13, 2012 @ 3:19 pm
jay sihag said,
February 13, 2012 @ 4:55 pm
nice one
tufail khan said,
February 23, 2012 @ 9:18 am
nice poems keep writing
kushagra sathe said,
February 23, 2012 @ 9:20 am
very well written short peom how can anybody hate it
kushagrmudassar said,
February 23, 2012 @ 9:22 am
amazing poemmmmmmmmmmm love it shame on them who give bad response
shruti said,
February 23, 2012 @ 9:25 am
very badddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddd and shame on the writer my friend write good stories
aishwarya said,
February 29, 2012 @ 1:54 pm
hmmm…..not dat gud…………….
happy mamdotia said,
May 2, 2012 @ 5:11 pm
fudu kavita saali
preeti said,
May 18, 2012 @ 5:48 am
kya poem hai very nice gud job bhauuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuut gyada achhe hai’ awesome yaar ”””””””””””””””””””””””””””””””””’just joking””””””
funny pictures said,
May 19, 2012 @ 2:14 pm
You can definitely see your enthusiasm in the paintings you write. The arena hopes for more passionate writers like you who aren’t afraid to mention how they believe. All the time go after your heart.
webmaster said,
May 26, 2012 @ 2:32 pm
sale aesi poems likne se phale tu mar kyo nahio gaya
Anonymous said,
May 26, 2012 @ 5:27 pm
Yeh kya tha?????
???????? said,
May 28, 2012 @ 4:31 am
the yukiest poem ever read………… it was bakwaaaaaaaaaaaaas………
hhhhh said,
May 28, 2012 @ 5:33 pm
isese achi poem to koi hoi hi nahi sakte aise poem do char aur likhi na to usse pehele kai bar soch lio likhu ya atma hatya karu
nitya said,
June 21, 2012 @ 12:46 pm
very essy ianguage written poem, with good sence of hummar.
Soumya Kishore said,
June 28, 2012 @ 7:35 am
amazing…
kartik jangda said,
July 4, 2012 @ 12:29 pm
good
poem for summer
tanu said,
July 5, 2012 @ 11:59 am
nice poem ………
Harshit jhaveri said,
July 8, 2012 @ 11:53 am
It’s great that a person like me is commenting on this poem
Fabulous. Great
IK said,
July 24, 2012 @ 4:59 pm
BAKWASS
MAYANK said,
July 29, 2012 @ 11:50 am
thik thik hei kafi choti poem hai
garima kashyap said,
August 1, 2012 @ 3:00 pm
d worst i av eva seennn………..
jst get thhe hell outta here..
dusht danav said,
August 1, 2012 @ 3:01 pm
farrjjjjiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii………………….
shreya bansal said,
August 8, 2012 @ 4:30 pm
gud 4 nursery kids.
annanya said,
August 23, 2012 @ 11:35 am
ewwwwww…………………………..
bakwas batar yuck
suhasi said,
August 23, 2012 @ 4:40 pm
wah!the best bakwas poem ever
Ravi said,
August 25, 2012 @ 6:59 am
Hey Akkibaba mind ur language.the most problem of the poem is that it is very small for a 7th grader .BAKVAS SADELI POEM.
pradnya more said,
September 2, 2012 @ 9:00 am
jisney bhi likhi hai bahut gandi hai
sumi said,
September 5, 2012 @ 5:53 am
it is not good.
sumi said,
September 5, 2012 @ 5:54 am
i think so,it is little good.
sumi said,
September 5, 2012 @ 6:22 am
you must now write about winter.
aishwariya said,
September 5, 2012 @ 3:52 pm
very nice
from shikandi & pikari
Bhagyashree said,
September 6, 2012 @ 5:16 pm
awsome…………………………………………….! i liked it very much
dhyan said,
September 10, 2012 @ 4:06 pm
making a sad mood laugh
MADHAVI said,
September 22, 2012 @ 5:26 am
NOT SO GOOD NOT SO BAD BCOZ IT IS SO BAKWAS KAVITA
ddfffghh said,
October 2, 2012 @ 8:52 am
poem is very short u would had made long…..den it would b nyc!!!!!!
harshith said,
October 3, 2012 @ 12:02 pm
good poem
Eshaan said,
October 11, 2012 @ 12:54 pm
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sp.sibani said,
October 13, 2012 @ 5:52 am
cool and really funny it entertained me
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vidhi singh said,
October 16, 2012 @ 2:15 pm
kya baat hai
Prateek said,
October 24, 2012 @ 7:57 am
Good poem……
.but make it long
Gokul Sapra said,
November 21, 2012 @ 12:41 pm
baaaaaaaaakws
jay dohare said,
December 10, 2012 @ 2:06 pm
i feeeeeeel, u deserve remark but u dont know which remark u getting
smriti said,
December 21, 2012 @ 4:06 pm
bttr lck nxt time
agli baar please big & funny:/:p!!!!!!!
jahnavi said,
December 31, 2012 @ 4:08 pm
nice poem . but it is not so funny. make funny poems.
aaratar said,
January 3, 2013 @ 11:07 am
phsco
shalini said,
January 8, 2013 @ 11:53 am
wah kya kavita hai
ja chulu bhar bhar pani mai doop mar
abhishek singh said,
February 19, 2013 @ 5:54 pm
faltoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
JAYANT said,
April 17, 2013 @ 1:28 pm
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diana gupta said,
April 29, 2013 @ 3:11 pm
its not too funny……..
sharvesh kaur said,
April 30, 2013 @ 2:21 pm
i like it very muh
revitol said,
May 21, 2013 @ 1:29 am
I was recommended this blog by my cousin. I am not sure whether this post is written by him
as nobody else know such detailed about my difficulty.
You’re amazing! Thanks!
GUJJAR said,
June 16, 2013 @ 9:57 am
AUR KUCH NO MILO TO
catherine said,
June 18, 2013 @ 3:02 pm
i never think this will be a poem it is very short an d stupid